Strengths : I like the way this has been laid out alot. I think the image is strong as the model is looking straight into the camera and I also really like the effect of half of her face being in the dark, as I think this shows the genre well. The use of the prop is also really good. Additionally, the set out of the artist's name + title of the Q&A is really good. Also the answers seem well thought out. Weaknesses: You haven't included a small introductory paragraph which introduces the artist/ the topic of the interview which is normally a convention of a DPS. Also I think the tone of the questions could be more conversational as they seem quite formal right now and maybe make the typography of the work 'Intergalactic' and 'Molly B' bolder, as they are the stand out parts of the article. Also there are no pull -quotes.
This is a very well constructed piece of work which needs to be improved on but overall well done. However the picture needs to be clearer for for example the text is coming in the way blocking the readers view.
Strengths : I like the way this has been laid out alot. I think the image is strong as the model is looking straight into the camera and I also really like the effect of half of her face being in the dark, as I think this shows the genre well. The use of the prop is also really good. Additionally, the set out of the artist's name + title of the Q&A is really good. Also the answers seem well thought out.
ReplyDeleteWeaknesses: You haven't included a small introductory paragraph which introduces the artist/ the topic of the interview which is normally a convention of a DPS. Also I think the tone of the questions could be more conversational as they seem quite formal right now and maybe make the typography of the work 'Intergalactic' and 'Molly B' bolder, as they are the stand out parts of the article. Also there are no pull -quotes.
Nice picture with the jacket flowing on the top and a nice detailed Q and A, but put more colous within the text.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very well constructed piece of work which needs to be improved on but overall well done. However the picture needs to be clearer for for example the text is coming in the way blocking the readers view.
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