Strengths: Range of different cover lines and pictures on the top right. Weakness: include a Barcode and Price and dateline change the colour of your text. And change some of the cover lines.
Strengths: I like the colour scheme of the magazine and I think the cover image correctly portrays the genre. Also the addition of the extra photo's at the top is good. The titles of your coverlines are also good. Weaknesses I think the layout of the cover lines is a bit weird and in some ways does not look professional so maybe place them a bit better. I also think you should do something to make the masthead bolder as it doesn't stand out that much. Maybe work on the font of the text as well.
Strengths: Range of different cover lines and pictures on the top right.
ReplyDeleteWeakness: include a Barcode and Price and dateline change the colour of your text. And change some of the cover lines.
Strengths: I like the colour scheme of the magazine and I think the cover image correctly portrays the genre. Also the addition of the extra photo's at the top is good. The titles of your coverlines are also good.
ReplyDeleteWeaknesses I think the layout of the cover lines is a bit weird and in some ways does not look professional so maybe place them a bit better. I also think you should do something to make the masthead bolder as it doesn't stand out that much. Maybe work on the font of the text as well.